Friday, September 27, 2019

History of Jerry the rich man

History of Jerry going over
the mountains in 1919

On one dark morning, Jerry and his family were in Arthur's Pass.
Jerry wanted to go to Grey mouth with his family.

So Jerry was waiting for the carriage to arrive, but when it
did there was a girl riding! Jerry was so surprised cause usually
boys only drive the carriages.

And so Jerry went to the front with her and everyone else went
into the carriage! After a few
minutes there was a big shake! Everyone screamed as Jerry
and Lillian (The girl) pushed the carriage up with all five horses.
All the girls grabbed part of the carriage and held for dear life!
(cause girls don’t push).

After a few hours they arrived at Grey-
mouth. Jerry and his family went back home and all the roads
were black, white and bumpy. The ground shook but the
carriage kept going horses tripped but they still kept walking
Jerry's family finally arrived at home and lived happily ever after.


based on historic facts on coach driver Lil

1 comment:

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